Module 04 of 040 of 3 method steps reviewed
Edit for comprehension and life
Remove repetition and dead setup while preserving breath, emphasis, and the connective phrases that reveal thought.
Three things to do before writing.
Check each step when you have applied it to the material you brought with you.
Put it to work
Review the recording once without sound and once without picture; note where either track fails to carry its editorial job.
Write enough to make the next decision easier. This is a working note, not a polished submission.
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